Bonjour je suis en 4e et j'aimerais que quelqu'un m'aide à corriger mes fautes dans un devoir d'anglais . Merci d'avance Le devoir : My locker is very big. The
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melacgasf94
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Bonjour je suis en 4e et j'aimerais que quelqu'un m'aide à corriger mes fautes dans un
devoir d'anglais . Merci d'avance
Le devoir :
My locker is very big. The color of my locker is blue. In my locker, there is my phone next to my headphones. On the door of my locker, there is a poster of my favorite gymnast and a picture of me and my friends. In my locker, there is my gym bag. In my bag, there are my shoes and my t-shirt.
I have some change of clothes if I want to change. I also have crisps in case I'm hungry.
The pencil case in my art is also in my locker, while the pencil case is in my bag.
And finally, my books are in my locker under my kit, because they are very heavy.
devoir d'anglais . Merci d'avance
Le devoir :
My locker is very big. The color of my locker is blue. In my locker, there is my phone next to my headphones. On the door of my locker, there is a poster of my favorite gymnast and a picture of me and my friends. In my locker, there is my gym bag. In my bag, there are my shoes and my t-shirt.
I have some change of clothes if I want to change. I also have crisps in case I'm hungry.
The pencil case in my art is also in my locker, while the pencil case is in my bag.
And finally, my books are in my locker under my kit, because they are very heavy.
2 Réponse
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1. Réponse jungofthehoseok
Bonjour je n'est détectée aucune faute. Enfin je penses j'ai tout compris c'est clair et vif sûrement manque tils un peut de conjugaison mais rient de plus grave
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2. Réponse Tsb2pvris
J'ai vu aucune faute a par un peu la conjugaison ms sinon c tres bien