bonsoir , je vous demande de bien vouloir avoir la gentillesse de me relire et me dire si mon texte en anglais vous parait correctement orthographié et bien co
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bonsoir , je vous demande de bien vouloir avoir la gentillesse de me relire et me dire si mon texte en anglais vous parait correctement orthographié et bien composé . Merci d'avance .
Hello , my name is Noah and last year I had 12 years .
My biggest achievement last year was the victory of the basketball final .
My mother prepared my best meal was pasta with eggs and the best movie I saw was " Alladin 2" but I'd seen it .
I love listenning to the radio but the best song Iheard was " BOOBA" so next year , I will buy her album .
And finally , the best compliment I received last year was " you are the king" then everybody had smile .
Hello , my name is Noah and last year I had 12 years .
My biggest achievement last year was the victory of the basketball final .
My mother prepared my best meal was pasta with eggs and the best movie I saw was " Alladin 2" but I'd seen it .
I love listenning to the radio but the best song Iheard was " BOOBA" so next year , I will buy her album .
And finally , the best compliment I received last year was " you are the king" then everybody had smile .
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1. Réponse Anaelle31
1. My mother HAD prepared my best meal. (c'est beaucoup mieux)
2. IT was pasta with eggs. (La phrase est mieux tournée si tu mets un point entre les deux et que tu rajoute it)
Sinon c'est plutôt bien ✌