bonjour, j’ai un devoir en anglais sur le parc yellowstone, pouvais vous me dire si j’ai fait des fautes dans ce texte, merci d’avance. The Yellowstone National
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bonjour, j’ai un devoir en anglais sur le parc yellowstone, pouvais vous me dire si j’ai fait des fautes dans ce texte, merci d’avance.
The Yellowstone National Park is a national park of the united states located on three states.
This park has been created in march 1872 by Ulysses Grant, it is the most ancient national park of world, it area is 898,000 hectares.
Yellowstone park is famous for it’s geothermal phenomenal as the geysers which erupts several times a day, spouting the water heated by volcanic rock deep within the earths.
The park accommodate many mammals as black bears, grizzlies, coyotes, wolves, elks, bisons ... many of them are in danger of disappearing.
Each years, about three millions peoples visit the park, making it one of the busiest parks.
The Yellowstone National Park is a national park of the united states located on three states.
This park has been created in march 1872 by Ulysses Grant, it is the most ancient national park of world, it area is 898,000 hectares.
Yellowstone park is famous for it’s geothermal phenomenal as the geysers which erupts several times a day, spouting the water heated by volcanic rock deep within the earths.
The park accommodate many mammals as black bears, grizzlies, coyotes, wolves, elks, bisons ... many of them are in danger of disappearing.
Each years, about three millions peoples visit the park, making it one of the busiest parks.
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1. Réponse Lola2k19
Tout ton texte est correcte.